04
Jul
08

The Need

Happy 4th of July everyone!!  This is my first attempt at writing an erotic story - hope you enjoy!  :)

She needs to be beaten, to feel humiliated and degraded.  She’s already sunk so low, but it isn’t enough to quench the ache.  There has to be more that he could draw out of her.  Hold her down.  Slap her.  Rape her.  Shock her.  Yell obscene words in her face.  Make her look him in the eyes, make her repeat the filthy words back to him.  Fuck her mercilessly.  Make her cry!  Make her cry!  She really needs the emotional release that tears would bring.  She also needs to be made love to, she needs to be held and gently stroked as she whimpers quietly.  She needs him to leave his mark.  She needs the pain.  She needs to be bruised.  Broken.  Break her mind.  Break her spirit.  Break her heart.  Then he can rebuild them.

She’s kneeling before him looking him in the eyes.  She’s scared, but curious.  His eyes look cold and menacing.  He slaps her and she winces from the sudden pain.  Then he’s on her, his hands clasped tightly around her throat and she can’t breath.  He lets go and starts molesting her body while she’s gasping in air.  She wants to run and hide.  She can’t face her own truth.  She can’t accept her desire to be dominated by him, to be beaten into submission until she’s nothing more than a pile of sniveling snot on the floor.  The feeling, this need inside her is not new, but it is scary.  He’s penetrating her again, claiming what is his.  She gives in to the need.  Gives herself over to him and drowns in her desire.  He makes her say it.  To admit it out loud and she does without hesitation.  She screams that she craves the abuse, that she wants nothing more than to be his puppet and his whore.  He smiles at her.  She lowers her head and softly smiles too.  He’s the one.  He’s her center.  He’s the one who will break her down and then heal her.  Salvation.


2 Responses to “The Need”


  1. 1 Mj's slave July 11, 2008 at 10:31 am

    HOT!!HOT!!HOT!!

    i just discovered your blog while out surfing early in the morning.

    i was laughing out loud from your rant about the “fucktards” who know the “ONE TRUE WAY”..so i kept reading. i get very few comments in MJ’s blog..period. So if people don’t like to “hear” about our way…then they must roll on..but it does amaze me when i read elsewhere at the stupidity shown by some in offering their view as the “Best or Only”….i guess it is really more telling about them and their own personal comfort level with their chosen path than any reflection on the judged.

    i love the title of the blog, BTW. i hope you continue writing. It’s great to read a fresh voice! i have you bookmarked and i’ll be back to read more.

    ~nik

  2. 2 pinkroses521 July 11, 2008 at 1:17 pm

    Thank you! So many compliments that now I’m blushing!! lol :)

    Rose

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